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Depression Is

In the garden of depression where crowds pass through like endless fog the light must shine through just enough for it is here the most beautiful art, in any form, begins to sprout Depression is .... a short poem contest 12/04/2016

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Date: 1/4/2017 12:26:00 AM
I'm not sure I agree that "the most beautiful art...begins to sprout" when depression hits an artist. I've never experienced depression to the degree. I do get moody at times with temporary loss of ambition, that's all. So I stop writing and do something else until I'm back in my writing mood. Thank you for the kind stop by, and best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Jeff Davies
Date: 1/4/2017 5:45:00 PM
Hello, Maurice thank you for the reply. Great works of art begin in every example of the human condition. What makes art born in depression especially beautiful to me is that it comes from a vulnerable and very raw place.
Date: 12/17/2016 9:06:00 AM
Thanks for commenting, Kai
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Date: 12/17/2016 2:21:00 AM
Yap, this place is where art and life begins to sprout. Congratulations on your win, Kai
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Date: 12/9/2016 8:53:00 PM
wow, I LOVE this perspective. DEEP!!
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Jeff Davies
Date: 12/10/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 12/9/2016 12:24:00 PM
Well written and contains truth! Congrats! :-)
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Jeff Davies
Date: 12/10/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Mark
Date: 12/9/2016 9:05:00 AM
I love your poetic poem very good congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Jeff Davies
Date: 12/10/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 12/9/2016 7:13:00 AM
Interesting take, Jeff - and you are absolutely right. The best art often comes from the darkest sadness. Congrats on your win.
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Jeff Davies
Date: 12/10/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you Agnes
Date: 12/9/2016 3:07:00 AM
Hi Jeff, Congratulations on your win: -) Alexis
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Date: 12/9/2016 12:25:00 AM
THAT.... is so true. Beautifully described. Congratulations!
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Jeff Davies
Date: 12/10/2016 4:26:00 AM
Thank you, Darren
Date: 12/5/2016 9:00:00 AM
Very true ... In both there is focussed rumination ... Very well written ...
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Date: 12/4/2016 10:28:00 PM
There is a lot of truth to this, Jeff. That's being very broad minded of you. Most people call it eccentricity. I like it:)
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Jeff Davies
Date: 12/5/2016 4:07:00 AM
Thank you for the thoughtful reply, Daniel. It seems in life creating art can be a very therapeutic experience.

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