Depression

Strange sardonic shadow stands and stares, but when I turn and look their spent force Spirited less and scraggly I have become set. Hallucinations or are they real? 12/4/2016

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/16/2016 11:22:00 AM

This poem is brilliant. Congratulations on your win. Real hallucinations, great. Many wishes, Kai

Jeff Davies

Date: 12/10/2016 4:42:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve! Well written

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2016 8:49:00 PM

VERY nicely done, Eve!! Big congrats.

Deborah Burch

Date: 12/9/2016 9:28:00 AM

Well Done,Eve!! Hugggs,Deb.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 12/9/2016 7:09:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Eve. Love the alliterations.

White Wolf

Date: 12/9/2016 4:15:00 AM

Well done on your win

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/9/2016 2:57:00 AM

Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/9/2016 2:05:00 AM

Great alliterative way to describe depression, Eve:) congratulations on top win:)

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/9/2016 12:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Eve - you made it real. The little 'Captcha' box says "YAY." (It really does. : ) -- On a lighter note, yes, they are real - you have described some of my co-workers.

Darren White

Date: 12/9/2016 12:21:00 AM

Very good short on depression. Congratulations!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/8/2016 1:45:00 PM

Hi Eve, This is good take on depression. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Laura Leiser

Date: 12/5/2016 2:55:00 PM

This is an interesting take on depression, Eve. I like it, very creative! Good luck in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/5/2016 12:23:00 PM

total alienation so well expressed, eve... huggs

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 2:36:00 PM

Thank you so much for the inspiration. Have a Merry Christmas

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/5/2016 8:54:00 AM

Very well expressed ... Nice alliteration ...

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 12:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year

Chris Green

Date: 12/5/2016 7:57:00 AM

This was an amazing piece of poetry Eve. The depth of these motions and the loneliness are definitely felt in your words.

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 12:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2016 1:44:00 AM

I am struggling to write on the subject as I'm not a sufferer Eve - you have described it well:-) hugs jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 12/4/2016 11:58:00 PM

Yes, depression is a terrible thing! Great write on the subject, Eve, and good luck!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration, Rick. : ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year