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Depleted By Tomorrows

Sunbaked to crisp this rag your hand enriched, Hangs on a wire exposing tattered thread, Rung-out depleted by tomorrows switched, Lifeless without you, left, now lonesome bled. Days wiped as months turned years following fast, All while my focus rusts once where we were, A rite of damnation pirouettes past, Encircling sorrow’s waist with dizzy blur. Spun as a ragdoll shook in infancy, Watching my purpose, or the lack thereof, Unable to cry so wide-eyed to see, Shadows forgotten plunged searching your love. Were you an empress I’d be worn a crown, Longing for tears so my sadness could drown. 10/23/2016 Submitted for: Words Drowned in Tears Poetry

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Date: 10/24/2016 6:45:00 PM
Phillip congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful sonnet
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:36:00 AM
Very emotional and wonderfully written. Congratulations
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Date: 10/23/2016 11:57:00 PM
Dear Phillip, very sad and emotional write this is....Spun as a ragdoll shook in infancy ...loved this line! congratulations on your win//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/23/2016 6:32:00 PM
Phillip, great emotional write congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:38:00 AM
One word. WOWZER. Alright, it's deserving of more than one word. Too many good lines to choose from, each sentiment cries out to be heard. That finish is par excellence!
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/23/2016 8:39:00 AM
Go go gadget wheels! Thank you very much ma'am, a lovely comment to wake up to :)

Book: Shattered Sighs