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Dependence Door

I despise this horrible mind attack The mistakes I've made have caused horrid facts I have wrecked everything; left bad impacts Is it that bad, to wish the normal back? The circumstances, of a week before? Before you grew impatient; slammed the door? Beautiful disaster; has no galore I'm crying, bleeding, on the dirty floor I cannot blame anyone but myself This ill fate has gave me terrible luck My arm, says, "This big loss puts me through hell." When I beg your mercy, you scream, "Shut up!" I'm hysterical, weeping, on the porch Will you please, please, please just open the door?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/2/2011 3:57:00 PM
Nice attempt at writing sonnet with expressions, Maddie
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