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Departures

I never overcame your departure brothers since then my feet walk crippled the kidney only filters half of the residues my heart partially collapsed and beats insufficiently the gastric juice became acid and corrodes the sweetness of dreams the bronchial airways are carbonized and emit a roaring echo the neurons lost innumerable synapses when dying necrotic but here I am with my soul regenerating light so that the guide with the candle calms my rumble of jungle

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Date: 8/2/2011 8:59:00 PM
Congrats Dina on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Dina. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Dina. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/6/2011 4:06:00 PM
Dear Dina: Powerful and emotional poem. Well done. Thanks 4 reading and commenting on my poem Closing In On Me. 2 answer your question...yes, I am a veteran of the U.S. Army. Peace: Sheol
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