Departure
influenced by living , time and
sometimes encouraged by others
i have decided to leave this land
one day , and be closer to my mother.
time has trampeled my life ,
my dreams are all shattered. no
children , no future and no wife...
having nobody to hold , nothing to show.
there's nothing i control , in which i can change
to make my life better. having friends is
wonderful , although i always feel estrang-
ed. my life so boring , drab , having no fizz.
~revised~
life is precious and not a thing is worth
causing anyone to leave it . so no matter how bad
it gets , even unshared love. nothing on this earth
..not anger , not pain... no matter how lost or sad...
.....shall force my early departure
Copyright © Brian Carver | Year Posted 2007
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