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Deodorant

Think I'll dress in my one suit, silk shirt and handkerchief, pop in a breath mint and shine up my shoes; make that impression, look good for the ladies, with cash in my hand what have I got to lose? Yet I wish I felt better more up to the task, my suit's sure been neater, my shirt has a stain; you don't notice it, though, when I'm wearing my jacket and the hole in my pocket? I'm not one to be vain. CODA There's no one to impress for I'm the only one I'll see, I'll roll on some deodorant so I'll smell good for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/27/2009 8:12:00 PM
Ode to deodorant,,,only you...
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Date: 4/23/2009 9:12:00 AM
Mail for Keith!!
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:13:00 PM
Haha, I love it :P
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Date: 4/17/2009 2:43:00 AM
Funny write Keith, nice work...Raul
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Date: 4/16/2009 3:42:00 PM
this made me laugh,ow so very funny-love it
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:41:00 PM
So funny, Keith! "I'm not one to be vain" either. In fact, my sister gets on my case because she wears designer clothes and I dress for comfort whenever possible. Who cares if your suit hides a stain and there's a hole in your pocket? As long as you feel good! More mail for you, Keith. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2009 12:03:00 PM
Got a good chuckle out of this one. Thank you for the day brightener. Keep on sharing your gift of humor with us. Karen
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Date: 4/16/2009 11:57:00 AM
I think I want to read and dance, Keith, you cannot dance this song alone.
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Date: 4/16/2009 8:34:00 AM
I agree, that this would be such a great piece of country music....with lyrics so well done!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/16/2009 7:30:00 AM
Your beautiful poetry fits to be a country music. Chase it. All the best.
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Date: 4/16/2009 4:54:00 AM
Nice write Keith.Really sad
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Date: 4/16/2009 4:27:00 AM
Wonderful write Keith..loved this smooth and funny write.
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Date: 4/16/2009 2:24:00 AM
Keith , well constructed , witty and sad presentation . I hope the "Lynx-Effect" , works .. Well done ...
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Date: 4/16/2009 1:59:00 AM
Its sounds like Jon Arbuckle; that's actually pretty funny in a sad way. Good job.
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