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Deodar Tableau

donned in Cedar wood Elevated tree Of worshipped taboo Divine oil to blend Awakens Sita Restoring ardor 3/20/2021

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/29/2021 10:40:00 AM

excellent word play in that final line, congrats on your win, I got n/a screwed up on my syllable count:-(:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/29/2021 1:30:00 PM

Thank you... i thought that it was 6 syllables per line and had to change things when I realized it was 5!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:55:00 PM

Hi Susan, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/26/2021 2:05:00 PM

Thanks Alexis Congratulations to you too:)

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2021 1:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win Susan, Nicely done

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/26/2021 1:41:00 PM

Thanks for the inspiration Glad you liked it :)

Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2021 12:23:00 PM

I believe that cedar oil is quite fragrant, Susan. Ships made of cedar wood used to sail in the Mediterranean hundreds of years ago. _ Congratulations on your fune win! ~ Regards // paul

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/26/2021 1:24:00 PM

Yes it is and keeps bugs away...that’s right Modern science is just catching up with all the special chemicals that plants secrete...congrats to you too:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2021 9:28:00 AM

very cool one, Susan. Congrats. Hope all is going well for you these days.

Susan Woodrow
Date: 3/26/2021 10:03:00 AM

Hi Andrea Thanks yes All is well tho i have moved yet again lol Will email you soon Congrats to you :)