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Denied

Denied With early sunset, the heart descends, veils of dusk and inconstant eyes, Set to return home, but one last flight, as darkness tears and stains vibrant vibes, My denied emotions ostensibly pretend. Written Oct 27th, 2015 © Dr. Upma A. Sharma Contest- any sad poem Awarded 2nd place win Sponsor- broken wings

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Date: 11/4/2015 3:50:00 AM
Uniformly flowing verse! Congrats for your awesome WIN Dr. Upma! ;-)
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Date: 11/4/2015 12:10:00 AM
Congrats on your short but powerful piece, Dr Upma. Viv x
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Date: 11/3/2015 9:24:00 PM
Well done. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/3/2015 5:49:00 PM
My friend, congrats on your win with this fine poem!!~
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Date: 11/3/2015 4:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/3/2015 2:14:00 PM
A wonderful write Dr. Upma. Congrats on your win, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:54:00 PM
Dr. Upma A. Sharma ,congratulations on your win! Sadness is hard for anyone :'( Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:15:00 PM
WOW! amazing! Congrats on your well deserved win :) -LU
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Date: 11/3/2015 1:06:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 11/3/2015 8:38:00 AM
Upma, I love your parallel of setting sun to setting heart--very creative. Congratulations on your win. Janice
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Date: 10/29/2015 4:58:00 AM
Pretending is one great lie, and its a cover up to your own self, indeed its hard and sad one! nice in 5lines!~Olive Eloisa
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