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Demoralized

The guilt of a smile The hidden scars I bare Feeling all lost You have nothing to compare. A laugh seems strange As it falls from my lips All dusty and bizarre Even to myself Guilty as sin Convicted more than once The feeling of life Is an unfamiliar touch

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/20/2010 5:37:00 PM
Well you got to start gettimg familar with life and what it feels like to be living. Great write I enjoyed it L.L.
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Date: 6/9/2010 12:36:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family... enjoyed reading your creative write tonight... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:24:00 PM
"the guilt of a smile" ,,,nicely worded,enjoyed..p.d.
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2010 5:49:00 AM
This is a nice flowing poem. I like how the first stanza starts with the alternating rhyme. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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