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Demons Dance

Insomnia, methinks, doth stink; It carts one quickly to the brink Then yanks those taunting forty winks And turns them into toss and blinks. The hell with all those leaping sheep! My thoughts on them would earn a bleep. Instead I stare, in darkness deep, As minutes into hours creep. The mind, it fills as demons dance So slumber doesn’t stand a chance, But as the daylight does advance They’re gone, without a backward glance. And then at last, I get to drowse. The lines smooth out between my brows; But obligations don’t allow The time to catch up anyhow. Another tired day will dawn, My pillow something I could pawn. I’ll greet the morning, pale and drawn And stifle yet another yawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/13/2014 1:56:00 PM
Very good lines. I especially liked "The mind, it fills as demons dance." It makes me think of blurred images when you first fall asleep.
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Date: 4/26/2014 6:48:00 PM
I'm so tired that I can't think. Happy passover, might as well drink. :) BTY, This is awesome.
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Date: 4/23/2014 6:10:00 PM
Interesting. Fortunately I do not suffer from insomnia. My grandmother did and lived to be 95 or so - nothing to worry about. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/20/2014 12:04:00 AM
I'd laugh out loud but must rather chuckle because I'm on rather close terms with sleeplessness. You nailed the form and got your message persuasively through. Really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 4/19/2014 8:59:00 PM
geez, I am so silly. Just went to check that one contest and it asked for devil and diamonds in the title. hahaha
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Date: 4/19/2014 8:40:00 PM
excellent witty writing, Ilene.I was not sure what this contest was all about . Maybe I will go look at it again. (it was for that demon contest??)
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Date: 4/19/2014 8:50:00 AM
Fabulous write ilene, can't believe no-one has commented. Made me won't to go back to my bed just brilliant loved it thank you
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