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Devil take it, drunk again. Evil was that vile Cocktail magnificent though it seemed at the time. Olive was very bitter and hard Never again my head hums at me. Dram of malt whisky finished things off. Rum and rice wine sure don't mix Indigestion the least of my worries. Nerves are all a jitter, hands shaking Keep still I in vain bid them. Storm clouds fill my stomach I flee to the loo.

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Date: 4/25/2016 3:29:00 PM
Excellent Acrostic my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/19/2016 11:06:00 PM
Shadow the title drew me here, the poem kept me! Loved this, I think most have been there, and can feel the the pangs of the hangover reading this!
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Date: 4/19/2016 3:25:00 PM
An explosive mixture Shadow...nice acrostic...
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Date: 4/17/2016 9:06:00 AM
rum and rice wine sure don't mix, you got that right, sounds like a cocktails for stomach chaos !
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Date: 4/17/2016 8:55:00 AM
Oh so glad I'm almost tea total Shadow - great acrostic:-) hugs Jan xx
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