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Delusion of Light

Once captivated by your light that shined bright Smooth sailing seas, but I now resemble a shark Your presence in times of sorrow, once a delight Again I move through the cold, this is my plight A weary werewolf under dark moon, not a lark Once captivated by your light that shined bright Freezing wind blowing I move from left to right The bitter bite foreshadowed by a familiar bark Your presence in times of sorrow, once a delight Confusion sets in and now, insanity with insight This thing threatens, but I’m obligated to hark Once captivated by your light that shined bright Weak in soul, but my mind feels a strange might The pleasant placating voice has to now embark Your presence in times of sorrow, once a delight If it’s a phase, I promise it is not done from spite This clever close alliterated, a remaining remark Once captivated by your light that shined bright Your presence in times of sorrow, once a delight

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Date: 2/17/2013 9:05:00 PM
About your poem: I call this delusions of light** this may be your subconscious acting suspicious over the feeling you have or had. I love the deep mental state in which is hidden in the dark flaw shadows around sorrow. I love this level in which love creates the delusion of a captivated soul. One can still live in this the spiritual light in which appears to be only a sorrowful delusion now under control. always~ PD
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Date: 2/17/2013 10:33:00 PM
Ah another recommendation that I will accept, I now too call it delusions of light, lol. Thanks for your lovely comments.
Date: 2/17/2013 8:54:00 PM
Wayland, making my way here on the soup tonight.. happy to say, it make me happy to know that you have not deleted the top 2 poems you told me about. First I will re-read this poem. I took a peak yesterday from my phone.... PD
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