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A sestina poem does not rhyme or have a syllable count, but I wanted to challenge myself with monorhyme and 13 syllables per line.

For Sotto Poet's Delphic, Delusion, Disaster Dauntless poetry contest. 11 May 2024

 

 

 

Affirmation without discipline is the beginning of delusion - Jim Rohn Without meaning, your mind may portray delusion, so some search for answers to end this illusion. Is it that simple to cleanse a life from confusion? When trials subdue the heart into seclusion, we yearn for a remedy with jasmine infusion, where the scent of truth is the ultimate conclusion. Before death calls to offer a final conclusion, create a loving legacy without delusion. Combine discipline with affirmation infusion, where positive aspirations are no illusion. Let go of wishful thinking when lost in seclusion. A return to reality will end confusion. In equality and kindness there's no confusion. Lennon said; "Make love not war"- a perfect conclusion. Like a poet left alone in depths of seclusion release words of sincerity to kill delusion. When demons arrive to tempt you into illusion, only a strong soul can resist their foul infusion. Poor values resemble a weak coffee infusion, if spirit does not kindle, it leads to confusion. Why stay asleep, lost in a labyrinth of illusion, when self-belief is a flawless diamond conclusion. Why remain trapped in a cocoon of mute delusion, use your wings to escape from effortless seclusion. Self - deprecation is a disease in seclusion, where self - belief blossoms in refreshing infusion. Self - deception structures puppet strings for delusion. where a tangled knot patterns a clot of confusion. When the muse is blocked there's no ink for a conclusion. You thirst under the heat of a mirage illusion. Illuminate to glow in rainbow toned illusion, shimmer like stardust when fate draws you to seclusion. Firm foundations flourish in a beanstalk conclusion, like sapphire skies blending in indigo infusion. Paint a self - portrait where brushstrokes remove confusion, when the heart is committed there is no delusion. Will power is like tea leaves and water infusion. A blend of herbal extracts soothing from confusion. Honest testimonies keep us safe from delusion.

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Date: 5/12/2024 2:47:00 PM
SO, a poem with many lessons on the dangers and benefits associated with what and how we think. I enjoyed reading this very much...great structure and content! Bringing me an internal smile you are!
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Date: 5/12/2024 5:02:00 AM
Tremendous effort on display to convey the effects of delusion on thoughts and minds. You brought to fore the theme brilliantly, SO.
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Date: 5/11/2024 10:22:00 PM
There's so much to be learned and loved about your words. You're so right, it is the honest testimonies that keep us safe from delusions. Good luck in the contest dear ...Hugs
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Date: 5/11/2024 10:02:00 PM
Your ability for meaningful and powerful rhyming is hereby proved unparalleled with only a few to come near you. Beautiful hints to escape delusions. "Why remain trapped in a cocoon of mute delusion, use your wings to escape from effortless seclusion." Love all the lines, particularly these. All the Best dear Silent One.
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Date: 5/11/2024 4:33:00 PM
you continue to amaze me with your ability to rhyme and tell something meaningful and wise. You addressed the contest quote thoroughly. I especially liked the last verse! Eloquent. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 5/11/2024 4:23:00 PM
Another form that you have mastered, my friend. Well done, Silent One.
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Date: 5/11/2024 9:42:00 AM
Dear silent one you do sestinas very well and clever of you to choose words that rhyme for this which ensures there is a captivating cadence throughout! I agree with so much youv expressed in the most eloquent manner! So beautifully woven, in such a deeply moving and meaningful rhythm! This one flows seamlessly, and i love it! “ Why stay asleep, lost in a labyrinth of illusion, when self-belief is a flawless diamond conclusion. Why remain trapped in a cocoon of mute delusion,“ this hits strong. I think so many remain in their comfort zone too afraid and reluctant to find out and seek through the path of unknown . So many lines in this hit strong for me! And are very touching! Soulful sestina! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 5/11/2024 8:27:00 AM
I applaud the depth of this very clever intricate and intriguing poem, few if any could write this tongue twister, you are a unique poet SO, and I feel honored to have met you on Soup. I had to concentrate hard whilst reading - a remarkable write within which has such wise content. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/11/2024 7:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful/wonderful write. I love how you started this one off. So True... A great ending. The answers do not always come. "Good Luck" Have A Blessed Weekend Writing Away.........
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