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Deluge

Measured day begins Misty pools create cascade Before mornings break

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/21/2010 11:50:00 AM
Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:23:00 AM
nicley penned, enjoyed also.
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Date: 2/20/2010 4:12:00 PM
An interesting way of seeing the picture, Cecil. Imaginative! Luv, andrea
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Date: 2/20/2010 3:24:00 PM
I enjoyed this ...good luck in the contest..I think you will do well. BG
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Date: 2/20/2010 2:11:00 PM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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