::Delta Forces::

washing away waves rivers aneal wretched seas ablution flows free by David Kavanagh

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/13/2021 11:38:00 PM

This poem is accurate and so clever Exactly what happens here David - our oceans in South AFRICA ARE BECOMING POLLUTED, AND OF COURSE THE INTENSE AMOUNT OF RUBBISH Collected BY THE WATER WHICH IS THROWN IN BY HUMANS, AGGRAVATES AN ALREADY BAD SITUATION. SORRY THAT i BROKE INTO CAPS, DO THIS OFTEN. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/14/2021 12:59:00 AM

Caps are fine Jennifer, this one is kind of ironic, the chances of pristine rivers cleansing the ocean are pretty much remote, human pollution pervades in most bodies of water, as you said aggravating an already bad situation, we can only hope it will be rectified by us pretty soon, cheers David