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Deliverance

Each day as the night falls and I lay my head on the lap of sleep to rest, Someone sneaks in through the backdoor of my mind and lights up myriad candles of a disconcertingly recurring dream. Holding my hand with an angelic softness It leads me on a meandering grassy trail across lush meadows through the fields of flowers past verdant woods and valleys onto a dusty sun-baked path engulfed in a shimmering haze of heat and dust to an abandoned stable that sits silently and forlorn in the searing midday sun amid a windswept wasteland. There it makes me sit on a sacrificial altar, Puts on my head a crown of thorns and hands me a burning cross. ~"Hallucination" contest by Brenden J Simons. "Dreams" contest by rob carmack

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Date: 3/26/2018 9:35:00 PM
That is some dream ! Great delivery, Abdul. Congrats on your honorable mention.
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Date: 3/23/2018 8:31:00 PM
Warm regards and congrats on a well-deserved Honorable Mention, Abdul - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 4/30/2015 6:33:00 PM
ABUDL. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Date: 4/28/2015 5:37:00 PM
Outstanding, Abdul! Congrats on your wonderful win! Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:38:00 PM
Abdul :) Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 11:27:00 AM
What a smile this brought to my face. Took me to Jonah sitting on the east side of Nineveh. Congrats Abdul.
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