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Deliverance

Foreboding luster Breaching the forest darkness Emancipation

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:40:00 AM

Congratulations Cecil, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/26/2009 11:10:00 AM

I loved how you used the light as being the deliverer of the darkness that was in the picture. I think your poem is filled with actual truth! Well done with this one! I like this. There is no question in my mind that this poem deserved a placement in this contest.

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 10:16:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Cecil > kool title , big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

Date: 11/24/2009 2:54:00 PM

Cecil, I wanted to stop by and add congratulations on your win in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor! Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 3:49:00 AM

Very creative and spiritual view of Raul's photo in this wonderful Haiku, Cecil. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 11/24/2009 3:47:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Cecil.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Cecil. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:59:00 PM

Congrats, Cecil, for your winning poem in Raul's contest... well deserved win .. great haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/23/2009 9:34:00 PM

Cecil, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/19/2009 6:38:00 AM

Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Cecil. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol

Date: 11/18/2009 5:08:00 PM

Interesting view on the picture for a faith message. The title works well with the last line. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/18/2009 7:56:00 AM

I love this one! Beautiful entry to the contest, Cecil! ~ Love, Carrie

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/17/2009 11:40:00 PM

Very nice..Love the last line. BG

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/17/2009 11:40:00 PM

Freedom, just as nature and life intended. Your words speak to my soul. Smiles from Lolita