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Delinquent

Look Mommy! Look at me! I'm building you a tower...high So high the is-there god will cry Out-loud with jealousy! Is not, could not, did not find- Smash the idiot design! One by one by block in line, Unpatterned and no one to see.

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Date: 7/27/2022 8:52:00 PM
Love your reflection on this seemingly innocent topic, which turns into a struggle between Good and Evil, Life and Death. Bravo! Strength and Prayer, Gershon
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Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 7/29/2022 4:32:00 PM
I've only now seen your comment, a very welcome one. I kept this quite a while, worried that it was too obscure! Not for you! Thank you!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things