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Delicate Nuance

Softly a breeze dances across my cheek Flowing through my hair as if wanting to speak Then lifting me up with its gentle magic Tenderly stroking my soul so savory and sleek As my body becomes weightless and weak Snuggling embracing you so mildly meek Flowing in sweet dips, let us ride with an ease Softest of whispers ask can it tenderly tease Soothingly tickling my essence to please Removing your stress spoiling you in many degrees Purring how my love for you will never cease A dreamy calm floats on the clouds seas In a delicate nuance as troubles we will release 8/6/2020

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John Fleming

Date: 8/30/2020 4:44:00 AM

Could not agree more than what has already been remarked upon...very pleasing, flowing poetry this, Brenda. Love that word - "nuance"! Again, has that underlying rapping melody that you employ so very well -- good work! In affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/3/2020 5:18:00 AM

Thank you so much John!;) his I have missed your comments!:)

Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2020 2:32:00 AM

Congratulations Brenda - written with that passionate Chiri charm and heart & soul that pervades all your work.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/9/2020 12:29:00 PM

Gary thank you so very much!;)

John Watt

Date: 8/8/2020 6:04:00 PM

You are on a roll this week with your wins, Brenda! Congratulations, my friend ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/8/2020 8:16:00 PM

John thank you! One can only try! Appreciate your comment!:)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 8/8/2020 2:15:00 PM

Brenda, this piece is truly delicate!!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/8/2020 2:37:00 PM

Newton thank you so much!;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2020 11:31:00 AM

Love the title of this beautifulflowing soothing poem, Brenda. GREAT avatar too!! oh I see you placed number one! Congrats.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/8/2020 2:37:00 PM

Thank you Andrea you are too kind!;)

John Watt

Date: 8/7/2020 4:14:00 PM

You certainly do have this style down to an art form, Brenda. Your words are saturated with tenderness and a quiet calm that is dreamy, soothing, and so romantic. Well done, and a hearty congratulations for your #1 placement ~ John

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/8/2020 2:37:00 PM

Thank you John it’s all from how I feel love should be!:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/6/2020 1:07:00 PM

Simply beautiful..tender poetry, Brenda.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/8/2020 2:36:00 PM

Vijay thank you!:)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/6/2020 10:59:00 AM

You are the Queen of romantic verse Brenda. No one writes them like you do. Tom

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/6/2020 11:01:00 AM

Ahh Tom thank you so much! I never realized I was royalty;) hahaha! Nah see I learnt it all from all of you here!;)