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Delectable Pleasure

on a quiet Sunday afternoon rain playfully danced amidst the flourishing trees of Georgia. memories tempt tastebuds with a sweet juicy nectar ripe with luscious desire. sensually fragrant arousing all senses slowly, delicately, sensually. peaches simply are.. the Fruit of the Gods.. one of life's delectable pleasures, for the God & Goddess in all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 9/24/2017 5:36:00 AM
Sensual title and great suggestive lines. Luscious and delicious images sem to jump forth .. Bravo!!! A fav...
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Date: 5/4/2017 8:48:00 AM
Good Morning Miss Lynn. Well now you're talking. I love this Free Verse and it is why Free Verse will always be tops with me because words and thoughts just flow. Everything about this entry is right and well. The theme words formatting and layout. All of it. Here is a toast to "delectable pleasure" and to the Gods and Goddesses everywhere. Well done completely and entirely. Have a wonderful day Lynn.
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Date: 4/11/2017 3:51:00 PM
I can relate to the way you treated this subject, Lynn. Peaches are luscious and sensual; they tempt with allure and suggestiveness. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 3/21/2017 9:25:00 PM
So true, a peach of a poem.
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Date: 3/15/2017 11:20:00 AM
Hi Lynn, one can always find real gems when one looks through the work. In writing this i look through and find this little gem. I do love the concept of this write Lynn. It is you, the style, the words. This is you singing. This poem itself is a delectable pleasure Lynne. This is a seven and a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:11:00 AM
By the way you chose a wonderful way to format this poem. The short lines intensifies the intent of each word. Beautifully done.
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Date: 2/18/2017 8:09:00 AM
Wiping my brow, whew. What a peach you are Lynn.
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Date: 8/11/2016 9:39:00 AM
Luscious write, I love peaches and peach tea. A very playful and sensual piece.
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