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Deicide

I close my eyes to hide the pain inside, I close my eyes to die inside. eyes are closed so i can hide, I close my eyes to die inside. Within my mind I search inside, finally in time I've died inside. I close my eyes to hide inside, with eyes closed i die inside Finally in time I die inside, only in time its deicide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/24/2010 3:19:00 PM
I like the play on words in this poem. It flows very well and is creative. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:22:00 AM
A fine introspective poem.
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Date: 5/23/2010 5:03:00 AM
strong words which you have written here, nice write
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Date: 5/23/2010 4:43:00 AM
DEEP WRITE, I LIKE THE WAY YOU WROTE THE FIRST TWO LINES, SO MUCH TO HIDE YET YOU KEEP IT MIND AND TO YOURSELF, ENJOYED
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