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Below is the poem entitled DEFROSTING ICE which was written by poet Kim van Breda. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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DEFROSTING ICE temperatures soar behind closed doors red hot touches oozing from pores CHAMPAGNE BUCKET she reaches across his body taut hand dips as seduction is sought ICE CUBES a single block strategically placed defrost drips as muscles are traced © October 2013—Kim van Breda

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  1. Date: 10/22/2014 8:27:00 PM
    Such an extremely naughty technique of arousal Kim! Seductive improvising, I'm enamored by the thought of this ice upon my body. The erogeny of temperatures, this is memorable poetry Kim...J.A.B.

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/23/2014 2:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Well Mr. J.A.B. You went and found my 'defrosting ice'-- I'm flattered. Seductive improvising indeed :) Every now and then I go off on a tangent to write a.... ummmm... lets say "passionate" piece. This is acceptable on P/Soup.... I don't think my others would be. It's all creative expression I know, but when I want to 'say it like it is' I do-- may offend some. I have been practicing writing "Rictameters"-- two of which... "Release" and "Desire" are borderline.
  1. Date: 1/7/2014 9:17:00 PM
    Well against all odds there is always a certain power of persuasion lol. Nice powerful write.

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:03:00 AM
    your comment on my PEACE poem is much much appreciated.Thank you

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:02:00 AM
    hot and alive poem Kim, very beautiful writing

  1. Date: 10/22/2013 1:50:00 PM
    This is so good.....hand dips as seduction is sought,loved it

    van Breda Avatar Kim van Breda
    Date: 10/22/2013 1:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hmmmm... one of my "naughtier" writes. but thanks for the compliment.
  1. Date: 10/22/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Perfect descriptive action make the portrait of the ice come alive. The poem form is one I hadn't heard of. Very nicely written.

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:28:00 PM
    Kim, I love this journey of the human emotions, they link together with such ease, very well done...David

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 10:01:00 PM
    hhhhHHOT, Kim!!

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 7:08:00 PM
    Wow! Fantastic!

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 8:38:00 AM
    ooooh I just love this one Kim :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 7:29:00 AM
    This surely warms more than the heart...have never tried Imagism but certainly like your stories.

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 9:46:00 PM
    Ooh-la-la, a hottie for sure. Well done, Kim. Soupmail Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Wonderfully done!

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 11:15:00 AM
    ... love it, Kim !!! <3 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 10:01:00 AM
    Hi Kim, A sensual write for sure..Thanks for visiting my verse.. Ken

  1. Date: 10/8/2013 8:51:00 AM indeed....