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Defining Love

Love- Walk a park? Putrid fruits? Butterflies- inferno? None of the above Frown, dear love. Frown. In love-twitch, Twitch. Quaver, Stutter Unsound Poetic lines, cherished love.

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/12/2009 3:34:00 PM

I am listening to your wisdom ... and will be still connected. Love

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 6/12/2009 8:55:00 AM

Thought provoking and very original Sajdah... you are talented

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/8/2009 10:30:00 AM

Pretty. Creative. Nice Work. Jese

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/27/2009 8:45:00 AM

short && creative! very exciting to read^^ oh and thank you for the comment!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/24/2009 11:50:00 AM

I like your style of writing wonderfully done! Laura :)

David Smalling

Date: 5/19/2009 9:56:00 AM

Still trying to penetrate the park ... where wrap in genius I stand afar off waving ... right on, dear poet.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/18/2009 1:21:00 PM

Thrilling.