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Defect

Defect
Crushed cracked
Smashing snapping shattering
To live the life you want, leave the life that's broken
Betraying forsaking abandoning
Disloyal turncoat
Defect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/19/2016 11:07:00 AM
congratulations on your placement. A wise use of words - abandon any disloyalty. Great diamante, a form greatly underrated in some circles. I love them, needless to say.
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