Deer

. Deer young wild free runs Open meadow grass flowers.. Road impact lights out

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2011 10:53:00 AM

Good Luck, Sara,..what a great haiku, thanks for sharing your wonderful haiuk~ God Bless,..p.d.

James Foulk

Date: 5/19/2011 7:55:00 PM

yes so sad, i will stop if a dog or cat or any wild animal runs in front of me, even if it means someone might hit my car, if fact my daughter Amy stopped for a dog that ran in front of her and someone hit her from behind. this was a great write Sara, sad but good. Thank you for commenting on Tender Heart.

James Fraser

Date: 5/17/2011 1:38:00 PM

So many innocent animals are killed due to modern man, very sad in fact Sara....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2011 10:36:00 AM

Oh, that's so sad, Sara. I just hate it when animals are injured in traffic. Your last line is worded very creatively. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 5/12/2011 8:55:00 AM

Very sad ending here,Sara.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 9:17:00 PM

ahhh, the poor little "dear" That's sure sad, Sara!! clever double meaning on last line.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/11/2011 6:53:00 PM

that's so sad isn't it? Don't like to see animals hit hey're just trying to make a living just like us ... and sometimes I think God allows one of his animals to be sacrificed to try and teach us something at the time even if it's "slow down and live and let live" Thanks for sharing, Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 1:24:00 PM

Exactly Sara... good luck if entered in Brian's new contest my friend.. we have much deer at home in N.J. .. good luck luv..