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Deepness of My Heart

In the deepest veins of my heart Love and passion flowing like a river ( My first haiku)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/26/2009 4:14:00 PM
Thanks you so much everyone!!!! Really made my day!!!
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Date: 8/22/2009 7:42:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 8/19/2009 12:19:00 PM
Nicely written featured Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/19/2009 5:03:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/18/2009 3:15:00 PM
A wonderful first introduction to Haiku!! Good for you, Sabrina! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/18/2009 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on being featured, kool Haiku Sabrina>>James
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Date: 8/17/2009 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sabrina. Love Carol
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:50:00 AM
Thanks you guys!
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Date: 7/21/2009 12:10:00 AM
pretty good #1.....:JP)
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Date: 7/20/2009 10:15:00 PM
i love your work sabrina...and welcome to poetrysoup.com and I hope that you enjoy..
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Date: 7/20/2009 8:45:00 PM
Thanks alot!
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Date: 7/20/2009 8:42:00 PM
this is a good first haiku
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