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Deeply Moving Thought

A thousand echoes whispering through the deep seashell As the common bond between us brushing sands is lovingly holding Sweet gentle tenderness On desert dry lips winds of change kiss Looking towards the mountains snow covering her face White clouds cap the head Just a plain country boy Drifting away with shadows of a past life's pain Holding dreams finding your love completes the circle of a promise Believing something greater exists As the birds sing over amazing grace Searching the high plain Blue holds heaven's vision As a cold wind alone cuts clean to the marrow

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Date: 2/24/2016 12:44:00 PM
- A beautiful poem Liam, wrapped up in a romantic nuance - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/22/2016 7:43:00 AM
"Holding dreams finding your love completes the circle of a promise " A promise indeed to unite in love's passion ;)
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:48:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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