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The Vineyard | MOTHER EARTH NEWS

When the orchard grows deeply lush filling all rows with grapes etched by dusk like a bold paintbrush, I trace its outline’s silhouette and rove along this patch Where quarter moon draws a vignette as leafage unfurl like coiled frills showing off plump of red … fruits ripe turned into wine on mills nectar releasing piquant scent-- A harvest which imbues Nature, her life- giving intent. ~ 10/23/2020 Contance La France’s Writing Challenge-Tercet Contest

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Date: 11/4/2020 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "wonderful" write and picture. I can almost taste your grapes. Enjoy your win................
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Date: 11/3/2020 1:16:00 PM
Perfection, Nette. Absolutely gorgeous! And congrats
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Date: 11/1/2020 11:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely Nature poem. Well matched to the picture. // Barry
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Date: 11/1/2020 7:33:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this excellent write, like your image too, a FAV for me _Constance
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Date: 10/31/2020 10:56:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/31/2020 12:00:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your win. I had a lovely glass of red Wine today. :-)
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Nette! Linda
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Date: 10/31/2020 11:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/31/2020 10:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 10/25/2020 8:16:00 PM
Love the imagery, love line 7 in this a superb poem.
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Date: 10/25/2020 1:36:00 PM
Love this... I wish you a win for this deserving poem. God bless you my sweet friend. :)
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Date: 10/25/2020 8:01:00 AM
A slice of heaven. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 10/24/2020 12:18:00 PM
If only you could find a way to pick the grapes before the birds do! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 10/24/2020 7:10:00 AM
This is so nice Nette! Beautifully written :)
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Date: 10/24/2020 6:15:00 AM
I got lost in your beautiful words...leaves unfolding like a frill. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 10/24/2020 3:47:00 AM
WE all love an orchard like this... physically and spiritually... Lovely imagery as always...
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