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Deep Within

Deep within the gated doorway of a shattered adults hurt, you find the innocents of a child. Lost in the ways of life, picked apart by strangers claiming to keep them from danger. Trusting in the heart to find that love that only comes from above. Gated now because of the years of false promises and dreams that brings the mind to dream and the heart to scream. Older now... the pain still remains and the heart is stained trying to remain in a world of no love. Tears, fears, and unpleasant years has brought ice, stone cold and not easily broken but easily melted by the burning lust and worldly thrust, to get you nowhere but alone again searching for your childish self as a friend to pick up and start again in a world that never ends in a lonely heart that needs a friend.

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Date: 1/16/2014 4:40:00 PM
I thank u ladies for your kind words and interest in my poetry. I look forward to reading your poems as well :-)
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Date: 1/15/2014 11:36:00 AM
Rekesha, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/15/2014 5:59:00 AM
Hi, Rekesha ~wow, that's a deep gated wall built to keep ones security in. , I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/15/2014 2:44:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Rekesha- I choose your first touching poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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