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Deep Within

Window panes rattle with les vents d'hiver Through the loose shutters puffs of cold dry air In the well-worn Batise gown she shivers Suffers without comforts_cabinets bare In the heat of summer, life much the same_ Lack of human compassion; emotions In despair, seek the Living amongst the lame- hearted, jot down feelings in devotions Deep within the Spirit speaks, " I will not leave thee or forsake thee, only good things I have planned for thee so don't be distraught." Deep in my heart, my spirit sprouts wings Window panes rattle with les vents d'hiver I am in touch with the One Life giver les vents d'hiver(French) winter wind I bought a shirt with that written on it.. I hope that is the correct interpertation Sponsor: Giorgio V Contest: Surprise Me Written July 22, 2013

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S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari

Date: 8/13/2013 9:40:00 AM

Great work. Congratulations and good luck from your new friend. Blessings to you Sara.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 8/9/2013 5:22:00 PM

Very nice poem! I can relate to this. Well done! Thank you again for reading my poem "The Real Me", and for the nice comments. It means a lot! That poem was about what people see on the outside, and they get the wrong impression of me. On the inside I'm a different person!

Chandrasekar Singaram

Date: 7/29/2013 8:15:00 AM

Absolutely fantastic. Congratulations :D

Len Gasun

Date: 7/28/2013 1:13:00 AM

Biggest congratulations on your super win my dear friend Sara! A great and excellent poem indeed which i love and enjoy reading this afternoon. thank you so much for sharing. Again, congratulations with biggest hugs! love lots always, Leonora

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/27/2013 9:38:00 PM

I surly donn't know but congratulations Sara. Sounds as though you know. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 7/27/2013 8:34:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Sara! Always, Annalise

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2013 5:21:00 PM

Sara lovely sonnet congrats on fine win Shadow x smiles

John Posey

Date: 7/27/2013 2:27:00 PM

congrats, Sara..... I can appreciate your talent in handling the French.... Jake

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 1:39:00 PM

Sara, , congratulations with your surprising winning poem in 'Giorgio Veneto' contest. always~ LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/26/2013 6:40:00 PM

Sara what an excellent Sonnet. Congratulations on your well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne Rutherford

Date: 7/24/2013 6:18:00 AM

Sara, love how you took the phrase in French and penned your wonderful poem. Re- your comment on Asunder ,he did leave ,died , trying to come to grips with being alone. hugs Anne

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2013 11:53:00 PM

I like how you took a French expression from a shirt and made this poem. I hope the judge will be delightfully surprised by your poem, dear. I once had a tshirt with a fun expression that translated: the more I know men, the more I love my cat. It sounded much better in French!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2013 11:35:00 PM

Deep view Sara, Giorgio, will love this poem... good quality... love..LINDA