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Deep Waters

"Deep Waters" These walls full circle This room full tide Deepest Deep Waters All shades of Blue Floodgate sheds lives Empty room Vacant garden bed Dead Womb Departure Called Home Cut the chord Reborn (Lovejoy-Burton/April 2018) Artwork/Rene Magritte, Deep Waters 1941 "Facades", Philip Glass/Michael Reisman https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_continue=109&v=OAYHRQphMb8

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Al Juman

Date: 8/8/2018 10:23:00 AM

Leanee I feel the happiness and pain in this write--- well done

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/8/2018 4:16:00 PM

While I was treading water, deep water at that, it gave me pause to think about "how IT all happens" - of course, this is my perspective on this page. Thank you Al.

Fj Thomas

Date: 5/7/2018 11:03:00 PM

Astounding artistry in word Leanne!

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 5/8/2018 2:27:00 AM

Thank you FJ, that is very kind of you to say. x

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/30/2018 1:31:00 PM

I agree totally w/Probir ... absorbing visuals to help accentuate this perfectly worded stand-alone prose. The beauty of your mind always amazes me. Keep your sparkling pen flowing w/glittering ink of wisdom. Love and joy always.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/30/2018 1:37:00 PM

Prob off page for a few days. But will still be writing. Post 'em up when I get back. Thank you R. x

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/29/2018 8:44:00 PM

Deep and beautiful ...

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/30/2018 12:32:00 AM

Thank you Probir.

Robertina B.

Date: 4/28/2018 12:48:00 AM

Hello Leanne - Such a deep and profound poem !! " Deep Waters " A pleasure to read!! Fantastic...

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/28/2018 5:59:00 PM

Robertina, love your poem about the Astral Realm. x

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/27/2018 11:35:00 PM

I like where you are going with this, Leanne.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/28/2018 6:07:00 PM

Line, your Haiku is stellar. If only I could tame my verbosity, perhaps I should give it a go. Love your Spring Haiku. Thanks for stopping by. x

Kishan Sharma

Date: 4/27/2018 11:26:00 PM

Nice

Kishan Sharma
Date: 4/28/2018 8:04:00 PM

To tell the truth,I have become habitual now. My heart does not believe in what I do. Therefore, I express my feelings and write it.

Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/28/2018 6:09:00 PM

Kishan, your most recent 'sonnet' is a real humdinger. It sounds to me like you have a thorn stuck in your heart. Very sad. Sometimes, you need to pull them out. It hurts for a little bit and then the wound heals. x