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Deep Thinker

There was an eligible undertaker Who married a trouble-maker. She gave him such grief He desperately sought relief. So he forthwith did under take her.

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Red Fiery

Date: 3/7/2016 8:25:00 PM

Wow ! You have perfected yourself with this piece...I am all set to read your other works...7/7 Brilliant !

Skat A

Date: 2/2/2016 11:52:00 PM

I once knew a guy named Paul, --- who had the greatest limerick wall, --- never did he write free verse, --- maybe he has a rhyming curse, --- something tells me he's having a ball, ---

Skat A

Date: 2/2/2016 11:52:00 PM

enjoyed. SKAT

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/3/2016 10:08:00 AM

I think you have my number, SKAT. I do enjoy writing limericks. It would be nice if I were better at it. I DO value and appreciate your comments. . . . There once was a poet supreme, whose limericks by Paul made her scream, leading alas to a discombobulated scene.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/12/2015 8:22:00 PM

Another great play on words! This one should get a prize. Loved it. / M

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/14/2015 10:33:00 PM

Forgive me, Maurice, for my tardiness in acknowledging your kind, supportive comments. They really DO mean a lot to me. Thank you, thank you.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/2/2015 3:43:00 AM

Extremely clever humour Paul - may drop this over to the funeral director later lol - he has a great sense of humour! Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/2/2015 9:38:00 AM

No worries - no need to apologise - I found it really funny Paul - I tend to always read your works if I can - I wouldn't comment if I found it upsetting - humour is what I need at the moment and this hit the spot:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/2/2015 8:06:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. It occurs to me that the subject matter of this limerick wasn't the best for you at this time. I apologize to you for that.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/2/2015 1:57:00 AM

G'day Paul... There's a theory here Paul for an unwary nagger. Don't upset anyone who knows the meaning of what compassion is when disposing with the departed. Thanks again mate - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/2/2015 8:11:00 AM

Lindsay, the theory is grounded in common sense, just what one would expect from the insightful Aussies. I appreciate your comment.