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Deep Moist Caves

There's a place where men love to go To explore dark moist caves The deepest, moistest caves known to man A most favourite spot they crave If you're not in shape it can make ya sweat But how amazing to succumb Deep in the heart of these dark moist caves You must try it you really must come If your mind's down in the gutter my friends Wasn't talking about sex you see Had ya fooled, was talking about travel To the Lost Sea Exhibit, Tennessee! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/25/2013 6:04:00 AM
ya ya not buyin it for a bit my friend, cant fool a fellow canuckian, Merry Christmas Jack
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/25/2013 7:23:00 AM
LOL Merry Christmas Carl!
Date: 12/24/2013 10:27:00 AM
I had several spelunkers where I used to work. One had to go into CarlisBad Caverns to bring someone out with a broken leg. Only professional spelunkers were allowed that far in there... Missouri and Arkansas are riddled with caves. A few, never make it back out. Our caves follow major land faults. Hannibal, Mo. is honeycombed with caves. In the 70's 2 small boys were lost there... People from all over the US came to find them. They were never found... The caves were that dangerous & extensive.
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:20:00 PM
I've actually been to The Lost Sea in Tennessee a couple of time... intriguing! xox
Date: 12/24/2013 7:00:00 AM
Ya right, you were talking about the Lost Sea Exhibit, Tennessee...sure my friend! Ha ha, you have brought a tear to my eye with the humor of this incredible poem Jack! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this morning! What a funny piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:17:00 PM
I have actually toured The Lost Sea caves more than once! Can't imagine what everyone was first thinking!!! LOL
Date: 12/24/2013 6:59:00 AM
KENNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WERE NOT!!! YOU ARE NAUGHTY NAUGHTY NAUGHTY!!!!!!! PHEW! Dear me, dear me...that had me going! Be a good boy. It is Christmas time. Hope you have a merry one...Umnmmmmm...stay away from those caves. They are DANGEROUS! ;)
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Date: 12/24/2013 1:16:00 PM
ROTFLMAO!!!! You're a hoot Miss Boop from Beirut! Methinks we're BOTH a bit on the naughty side, eh!!! Best of the season to you and yours, Eileen! Love and kisses, Kenny! xox

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