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Deep Into the Well

Now sits the Mocking Bird in the tree In the sky float clouds so light pastel, tan; Winter's end now gone__none too soon for me Draws the inside time to end__ play in sand The child in me wants to escape outside Refuse responsibility___be free But then comes the numbing__flowing of the tide Then I feel the call back__what has to be As sure as the granite rock doesn't change Hasn't anything changed because God made me To be like the Rose that buds each year same As the Swallows go away and the bees Seem to hibernate__the Phlox's root remain My roots go down deep into the well___see

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Date: 10/31/2010 6:31:00 AM
Well now my my dear I too will dip into your earlier writes, and Im so glad I did...This a beautifully wriiten piece... love the words and flow...always luv from Michael
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Date: 4/19/2010 7:09:00 AM
Interesting form. I like the line about God and roses. I would hope the true nature of God is to have a Rose that is constantly blooming and not only once a year:) Take care Sara. -Yoni
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Date: 4/18/2010 5:39:00 PM
your roots go deep down into a well that is well over never-ending, Sara, you deserve a life to fit that depth. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/18/2010 1:29:00 PM
Just luv this poem especially your second verse... it touched me deeply ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/18/2010 11:16:00 AM
enjoyed--keep digging in...
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