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Deep In the Woods

Deep in the woods, I am alert yet tense As I look around for signs of my prey But my prey is also aware of my presence In this cat and mouse game that we play Suddenly I stop in my tracks As I catch a glimpse of the deer Hoping my arrow finds it before the wolf pack Who I sense are drawing near The deer has picked up the scent of the wolves too But before it can scamper away My arrow finds its mark , but I knew That I might also become their prey As these savvy predators close in, it is no surprise That today belongs to the wolves, and I surrender my prize

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 8:40:00 AM
HI, I enjoyed the anticipation. Good job. Congrats on your placement Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 3/15/2014 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, joseph
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:15:00 AM
Joseph, Congratulations, on your Hunt for a Sonnet Gem. Awesomely done. ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/25/2014 8:12:00 AM
Dear Joseph, Your poetic arrow also found it's mark! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 2/22/2014 8:47:00 PM
One of my favorites of yours Joseph...then again I'm a deer hunter....less often now that I'm getting older, but this is a chilling wonderful write..
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Joseph May
Date: 2/23/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Donna...have you written any poems about hunting?
Date: 2/21/2014 7:44:00 PM
hey, what a great concept. Both prey and predator!! I would give that deer up mighty fast!!! (I even have a poem with this same title, Joseph. But it's a completely different theme!!)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/22/2014 10:32:00 AM
I searched for your poem, but didn't find it...was it the same title as this one?
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Joseph May
Date: 2/21/2014 10:05:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...I will search for your poem to see if I can find it

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