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Deep Gold

A rtist truly can not paint a picture perfect but when U nder magical conditions leaves of autumn T urn from deep olive green becoming tinged U ltra orange, burgundy, gold, deep red with the M any cool nights, warm days, cool rain so that green N ow becomes deep gold throughout autumn woods Read the end words downward

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2012 4:17:00 PM

It's real gold this poem also Sara - beautifully written. Have a sunny weekend in autumn colors. oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 9/1/2012 1:43:00 PM

beautiful acrostic, my friend - and congrats on your wins too : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2012 10:22:00 AM

lovely imagery floats through these lines Sara in breathtaking tapestry of Autumn.. good luck in contest and safe holiday too..

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/1/2012 8:08:00 AM

OIh a wonderful poem in it's own right, but then add the end word, also the acrostic form. it becomes a clever classic, love this

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/1/2012 12:31:00 AM

Solid one Sara, I looked at your contest I would like to enter but I think am to busy, enjoyed to read this; this morning.

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/31/2012 7:32:00 PM

Sara if this is for my contest ( and I hope it is) it isn't showing up on the contest page

Danny Stinson

Date: 8/31/2012 4:32:00 PM

I love your poem on my favorite season.

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/31/2012 3:08:00 PM

This is a great way to put together an acrostic poem for autumn.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2012 12:43:00 PM

Lovely way to do the contest, Sara. Good luck in the contest. Hope you are enjoying your Friday.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/31/2012 8:16:00 AM

This is a truly glorious write my friend! I loved every line of this Acrostic! I enjoyed the end words when I read them downwards, that was pretty neat! Clever idea that one was Sara! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!

Erich Goller

Date: 8/31/2012 8:10:00 AM

Colorful autumn, beautiful and colorful Acrostic.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Hugs!Erich.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/31/2012 7:41:00 AM

So cool the way you worked your end words! This is a stunning write, Sara. ( I think you meant "paint" in your first line) Best wishes in the contest. I'm sure this one will place high! Love, Kim

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/31/2012 5:21:00 AM

Well thought out!