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Deep Freeze

Winter days so cold and dreary Cause the soul to grow weak and weary Ice has covered all the trees It seems we are in a deep freeze But Spring is coming to the rescue Bringing hope and life anew Blossoms will soon cover the trees In will come the tropic breeze Then will come the butterflies Fluttering as they beautify Followed by the bumblebees As birds sing happily in the trees Winter soon will have to go As Spring comes in with gentle kiss Proclaiming to the cold and snow That winter thusly is dismissed 1 - 20- 2013

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Date: 2/4/2013 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:35:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 2/4/2013 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Francine's contest, Joseph!! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/4/2013 8:20:00 AM
Hi and congratulations Joseph love the idea of spring giving us a gentle kiss, I am waiting for a full blown smacker though xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 1:47:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph!!! Well done!! Bring on Spring!;) big hugs deb
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:25:00 PM
Congratulations! Connie
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Date: 2/3/2013 11:22:00 PM
congratulations on your winning write..
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Date: 2/3/2013 10:22:00 PM
congrats on your winning entry in my contest Joseph
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Joseph May
Date: 2/4/2013 6:28:00 AM
thank you Francine....glad I was able to place in your contest
Date: 2/3/2013 10:00:00 PM
Joseph, Congratulations with your wonderful poem ~ Always~ LINDA
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Date: 1/30/2013 8:37:00 AM
Joseph I love how your poem read like a song. Soothe and sweet off the tongue. I live in Michigan and today the high is 61 degrees and tomorrow 20 degrees. At least spring for a day. Good luck in the poem, very well done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/21/2013 2:59:00 PM
Makes me feel the warmth of spring iin the middle of January, Joseph. It's a beauty! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2013 7:18:00 AM
Sure can relate to this one! Love your positive outlook... spring is just around the corner! Yee haw!
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:21:00 PM
this is quite the popular theme now at Soup. And you did it justice , my friend.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/21/2013 6:42:00 AM
thank you Andrea

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