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Deep Confusion

Mind flutters in and out Which sings and screams all about Whatever thoughts have disappeared Some remain and some are cleared Sentiment of innocence forgotten now so long Of what once was is no longer wrong Scars of what once were tears Left now like some forgotten fears Distant times once so real Begin to gently again steal Happiness your great illusion Leads you into deep confusion Cluttered into your empty space You leave without a single trace Reminiscing of present sorrow Now but soon to be lost tomorrow Loathed among the liked sons Whom are now just among Simple minded weak but too strong Feeble life not lived too long

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/22/2011 7:20:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sean. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:00:00 AM
A poem with beautiful rhyming and expressions, Sean
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Date: 2/20/2011 11:10:00 PM
Good descriptiveness and rhyming in each of the verses contained in this entry. Good job.
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