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Deep Chill

She is the first I have met whom I cannot think of dead without regret without feeling left in a ruin. I break out from the stress of her in that long, black dress and her eyes welded. My soul is belted by her coffin. Let me go on forth, away from your storm, o' brutal Winter Spirit. Do not get me wrong, for I played along; but how she sleeps, lays a variable under a cloak of allure unutterable. We want more days, so pass your gaze onward, viscous Winter Spirit. __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ This is the first rhyming poem I had written in quite some time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/20/2010 1:34:00 PM
Welcome to Soup.... well done, very enjoyed.. Michael
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Date: 6/20/2010 11:42:00 AM
The chill of winter is devastating at times. This poem really tells a story. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:28:00 PM
well good gob on the rhyme, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 6/19/2010 4:16:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family ..so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:59:00 PM
enjoyed, welldone!!
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