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Deep Azure

I look at the ocean so clean and so fresh And admire the way it is so fashionably set The serenity of each wave as it the sand met The lazy waves as evey one to the shoreline get The hue so gentle, sublime and traquil I attest The view from my terrace impeccable at best A tranquility of body and mind I easily get Subdued and awed by the sweet waters depth I assume anonymity in this ocean I so fret

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/4/2008 12:37:00 PM
Great poem Fathima, I love the oceanic theme. It has a soothing tone to it...Raul
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Date: 12/4/2008 9:12:00 AM
I live by the ocean , also , Fathima , so I can relate to this BIG time.... So lets splash onnnnnn ......
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Date: 12/4/2008 5:49:00 AM
You are so lucky to have such a view. A mesmerizing, thought provoking beauty, the sea. Beautiful tribute. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/4/2008 3:30:00 AM
Beautiful dedication the the wondrous ocean! love, Kristin
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Date: 12/4/2008 1:26:00 AM
Fathima Me too, Food for thought! Beautifully written. Love Light Truth Patricia
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