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Declaration of My Love

My dearest one, come hold me close and hold me tight. Kiss me softly, with tenderness come kiss me light, We'll wander in our garden, all scented with thyme For I have given you my heart for all my time. As the red blood moon smiles and shines above full bright My heart flies high above like a colourful kite. We'll wander in our garden, all scented with thyme For I have given you my heart for all my time. The high brilliant stars above shine and twinkle white, And I declare my total love with all my might. We'll wander in our garden, all scented with thyme For I have given you my heart for all my time. We'll make love and vouch for our vows with all our might, In the heart of darkness, we'll enjoy our sweet night.

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/22/2024 1:41:00 PM

A beautiful sonnet- very dear

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/18/2024 9:15:00 PM

Delghtful.. mucic and romabce Pangie Romios

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/16/2024 2:17:00 AM

Beautiful romantic thoughts of the love you so adored Victor. When you’ve given your heart for all time love remains forever inside one’s soul and mind… Beryl

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/15/2024 11:46:00 AM

this is a heart wrenching sonnet well written Victor hugs Shadow

Christina Bowring

Date: 5/13/2024 9:21:00 AM

Dear Victor, this is such an enchanting and romantic sonnet. I love the refrain lines and the setting you have so poetically created. Wonderful imagery, ‘ red blood moon’ ‘high brilliant stars’ and I love, ‘ In the heart of darkness’. Great rhyming and flow throughout makes this a delightful sonnet. A real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.

Silent One

Date: 5/12/2024 1:36:00 PM

Lovely poem Victor..

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 5/11/2024 9:38:00 PM

This is such a lovely write Victor many blessings wishing you a blessed night.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/11/2024 12:45:00 PM

Very romantic, like a song your poem reads. Love the poem. Hugs Eve

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/11/2024 11:09:00 AM

An acknowledged promise scent to an embracing heart resting and waiting in a garden of all thyme ~ enjoy my friend for it is your thyme as well, Aloha.

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/11/2024 4:07:00 AM

"In the heart of darkness, we'll enjoy our sweet night." -- Lovely poem, Victor. Though we are complicated...Love is not. It only requires willingness and then, tender surrender. Excellent poem!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/11/2024 2:28:00 AM

What a lovely and sweet sonnet this is, so beautifully woven in such a passionate manner, expressing love and longing in a very inviting rhythm, that flows seamlessly. I love the opening of your sonnet and also the last couplet really stands out! Along with “ As the red blood moon smiles and shines above full bright My heart flies high above like a colourful kite.” exquisite simile and metaphorical touch to your imagery painted so eloquently! Pleasure reading this,

Maria Williams

Date: 5/10/2024 11:17:00 PM

This is so beautiful , A soft flowing dedication of love , and I think the repetitive line....for I have given you my heart for all my time, emphasises and makes it all the more beautiful. You are a great romantic poet my dear friend. One of your best I feel and a fave for me....Hugs

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/10/2024 11:00:00 PM

Great rhyme, and so emotional.

Valsa George

Date: 5/10/2024 9:24:00 PM

Even at this age, you are the great bard of passionate and romantic love. The invitation of the man to his dear one to ramble in the garden of thyme in the blood moon night is going to be a thrilling experience. Lovely sonnet dear Victor.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/10/2024 8:32:00 PM

Your beautiful, tender love poem is so enjoyable to read with its wonderful musical companion. Thank you for sharing. :)

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 5/10/2024 4:35:00 PM

Oh God! Victor . Maurice Jarre with the "theme of Lara" one of my favourities. Fantastic song for a stunning poem about love. This love is gone, nothing you can regret if it was the one you can remember forever. Difficoult moments that life puts you through, but nobody can take what it's in your heart. That belongs especially to you and it's nice you share it for the ones that appreciate you. Love/ María

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 5/10/2024 4:01:00 PM

this is a perfect love Sonnet, Victor. I enjoyed the fluidity and the rhymes. But your imagery is what captivated me: 'brilliant stars shine & twinkle' The last two lines were my favorite; liked 'heart of darkness' which is where I assume you are sometimes with the love of your life now gone. I'm grateful you're here on PS, Victor. I look forward to reading your poems as well as your comments to mine. Know you're admired and appreciated, Sara

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2024 3:49:00 PM

Such a romantic soul Victor! Debx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2024 3:32:00 PM

Oh so lovely and lyrical. Looks like for Dear Heart's contest.

Buhagiar Victor
Date: 5/10/2024 5:08:00 PM

No contest, I'm afraid.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/10/2024 3:19:00 PM

A beautiful love poem. It has a sweet peacefulness .

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2024 10:00:00 AM

all scented with thyme…blood moon shines above full bright…and vouch for our vows…romantic ~ hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/10/2024 6:23:00 AM

Dear Victor, What a breathtaking portrait of love. The fragrant garden's imagery bathed in moonlight is a picture of pure intimacy. Lines like "My heart flies high above like a colourful kite" capture that weightless feeling of love's joy. The repetition of "We'll wander in our garden" creates a sense of timeless devotion. Such a beautiful piece. - Blessings, Daniel

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/10/2024 5:37:00 AM

so romantic and delicate, enjoyed yann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/10/2024 5:14:00 AM

Ahh!! A very romantic sonnet. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/10/2024 5:08:00 AM

Perfect images in a romantic realm to declare love. Much enjoyed the tone and flow. Your repeating lines enhance the rhythm.