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Decisions

Dress that you pick that day Decides if you catch prize Decline or just give in Drink with them or just pass Divulge all or keep mum Drive,sail,walk or swim may Determine if you’ll live Written:08/29/2016 Contest:Pleiades D by Kim Merryman

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Kim Merryman

Date: 9/1/2016 8:22:00 PM

A nice way of depicting various decisions to illustrate your title! Congrats on your win, Sara! Blessings!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2016 5:05:00 AM

- Congratulations on your placement in the contest Sara, a beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2016 1:05:00 AM

I love the way you kind of put destiny in our own hands depending on what choices we make. A wonderful Pleiades! Congratulations on your win Sara! ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2016 5:46:00 PM

I really like the way you thought on this one and came up with different things to make decisions about . Very nicely done.