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Deceptive Lover

I read your lover’s poetry,
And saw his deceptive way.
He manipulated your emotions,
Which makes me angry I must say.

He promised to come and meet you,
He promised you everlasting love.
Then told you about another,
Must have felt like a slap with an iron glove.

I feel your pain of love loss,
I hear you silent  cries.
As you longed to be held,
Here he stands on your heart until it dies.

I know it will be hard to trust 
I know you fear loves pain
My arms are open my sweet
In a hope you feel loves warmth again

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 3:11:00 AM
    Hmmmmmmm....interesitng write, I must say. So good you are there to hold her...It is never easy to see love given to another, Syd...I feel for the person in this poem. I really do...Lovely write

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:41:00 AM
    Wouldn't you know I would pick this one. Just wanted to know if you were condemning yourself. Nice to see you are the cure for said problem. Great one Sid & your soup mail has been answered. Love, LIzzie

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 10:34:00 AM
    Very sad verses about betrayal..then with a very hopeful ending of open arms... lovely...Charma

  1. Date: 12/28/2011 6:55:00 PM
    You will be her super hero, Sidney, if she can get over this deceptive lover! I enjoyed reading this cool little poem of yours!

  1. Date: 12/12/2011 4:04:00 PM
    Such difficult words to read Sid. Lost love is always sad and you made it even more so. If anything, you did a great write as the emotion is all there. P S Is that you in the picture? Not at all as I pictured you! ha ha

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 8:39:00 AM
    beautiful lines from a beautiful heart.. sidney as i read ur wrks each and every poem reaches perfection. Brilliant !

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 6:59:00 AM
    beautiful Sidney...

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 4:50:00 AM
    A heartwarming write for someone who has been hurt in the past.. love the hope your bring across in the last stanza Sid :) love Wilma