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Deceptive Lover

I read your lover’s poetry, And saw his deceptive way. He manipulated your emotions, Which makes me angry I must say. He promised to come and meet you, He promised you everlasting love. Then told you about another, Must have felt like a slap with an iron glove. I feel your pain of love loss, I hear you silent cries. As you longed to be held, Here he stands on your heart until it dies. I know it will be hard to trust I know you fear loves pain My arms are open my sweet In a hope you feel loves warmth again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/20/2013 3:11:00 AM
Hmmmmmmm....interesitng write, I must say. So good you are there to hold her...It is never easy to see love given to another, Syd...I feel for the person in this poem. I really do...Lovely write
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Date: 8/11/2013 6:41:00 AM
Wouldn't you know I would pick this one. Just wanted to know if you were condemning yourself. Nice to see you are the cure for said problem. Great one Sid & your soup mail has been answered. Love, LIzzie
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Date: 4/19/2012 10:34:00 AM
Very sad verses about betrayal..then with a very hopeful ending of open arms... lovely...Charma
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:55:00 PM
You will be her super hero, Sidney, if she can get over this deceptive lover! I enjoyed reading this cool little poem of yours!
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Date: 12/12/2011 4:04:00 PM
Such difficult words to read Sid. Lost love is always sad and you made it even more so. If anything, you did a great write as the emotion is all there. P S Is that you in the picture? Not at all as I pictured you! ha ha
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Date: 12/8/2011 8:39:00 AM
beautiful lines from a beautiful heart.. sidney as i read ur wrks each and every poem reaches perfection. Brilliant !
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Date: 12/8/2011 6:59:00 AM
beautiful Sidney...
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Date: 12/8/2011 4:50:00 AM
A heartwarming write for someone who has been hurt in the past.. love the hope your bring across in the last stanza Sid :) love Wilma
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