Deception

Gain is what is advertized the victim’s passion is the tool to aid another’s selfish motive

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Mary Diliberto

Date: 4/14/2015 12:35:00 PM

how very true, a perfect insight in deception

Funom Makama
Date: 4/17/2015 11:41:00 AM

thank you so much mary

Richard Nnoli

Date: 3/5/2015 3:20:00 PM

so true and brave u soul here, i agree as the victim is always manipulated to an illusion, bravo richard

Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2015 12:23:00 PM

thank you a million Richard! I really appreciate it

Dan Kearley

Date: 3/5/2015 12:20:00 PM

Very nice! Wise words the world should read. I have read quite a few of your poems today. Sorry I didn't comment on them all, but if I did that, I tend to feel I'm writing the same thing over and over again. So I'm putting my comments all together here. You write with wisdom, and you share it in your words. That is great! That is what the world needs. :o) Keep up the great work, and thank you for stopping by my poetry. I always enjoy peoples input on my thoughts.

Funom Makama
Date: 3/21/2015 12:22:00 PM

WOOOOOOW!! I cannot express my gratitude enough... Thank you so much Dan

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/27/2015 8:44:00 PM

Complete and balanced thoughts! Keep well, stay safe! Mikki

Funom Makama
Date: 3/3/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for your storming words mikki