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December Sun

The December sun sets among the gray skies The snow falls down on the ground feeding my eyes The ending of such a lazy day all alone with snow and sun The waking of this cool day in the middle of nowhere has just begun The sweater i wear is a resting place for the the snowflakes The children laugh as they glide and smile over the frozen lakes The day has once again ended on such a lonely note The words i have written and the poem i have wrote The hopes of it being read for those alone The ones that spends their days at home Watching the endless fun and the setting of the December Sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 9:51:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here. So glad this was featured! Congratulations! ~Trudy~
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:29:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
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Date: 9/8/2009 6:14:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/8/2009 5:36:00 PM
Autumn - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj
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Date: 9/8/2009 12:31:00 PM
Autumn, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/8/2009 9:39:00 AM
This is a well rwitten poem of a beautiful place, a lovely time of the year, but depicting such a lonely person, best wishes---Norman
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Date: 9/7/2009 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Autumn *xx*>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Autumn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:10:00 AM
Autumn,..congratulations on your beautiful poem being featured this week ! How I long for those cold snowy days ! james
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Date: 9/7/2009 12:02:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Autumn.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/27/2009 6:05:00 AM
Another wonderful write Autumn, thank you for sharing this lovely poem>>James
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:28:00 PM
The summer is coming to a close already. You capture the spirit of winter in your poem. Reminds me of the song "Circle Game" - it was written either by Joni Mitchell of Buffy St. Marie. Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/23/2009 5:55:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for an uplifting view. Keep that hope alive. And keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/23/2009 12:42:00 PM
You bring back such delightful memories, Autumn. Though I now life in FL, I grew up in NJ and dodged the snowflakes as I skated on the frozen lakes until dusk. Absoultely beautiful, rich in imagery and a great rhyme too! Love, Carolyn
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