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multi-colored lights are back inside their boxes... magic of Christmas wrapped snuggly in white tissue is ready for a long sleep
___________________________________________________________ For Andrea's Contest 1/1//15 Tanka "December's Magic"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/7/2015 8:13:00 AM
I loved the old "bubble" lights when I was a kid... Thanks for the memories! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/5/2015 10:24:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Carrie
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Date: 1/5/2015 12:36:00 PM
Dear Carrie, I love the way you descried the "hibernation" of Christmas lights. I just took mine down yesterday. Thank you so much for the beautiful card an picture! You and your husband make a great looking couple. I'm sending you wishes for the best new year ever! Love, Carolyn (A 7 always from me, hon)
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Date: 1/5/2015 5:08:00 AM
Carrie congrats on a fine win lovely poem hugs
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Date: 1/4/2015 9:48:00 PM
but the tinsel will be stuck in the vacuum until August. Congrats on the win Carrie
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Date: 1/4/2015 8:22:00 PM
Carrie, this is a superb piece with clever personification and enjoyable imagery! Please accept my huge congratulations on a well-deserved top of the class win! Best wishes. Pandita.
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Date: 1/4/2015 6:58:00 PM
wow Carrie you are neat! I wind the string of bulbs around my arm & put them in a paperbag LOL Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/4/2015 5:33:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2015 3:57:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/4/2015 3:34:00 PM
congratulations Carrie for your top tier finish, keep em comming
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Date: 1/4/2015 3:01:00 PM
Lights having a long sleep till next year...very enjoyable, Carrie. Congrats on placing first in this competitive contest. All the best. // paul
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Date: 1/4/2015 3:01:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your 1st Place win for your wonderful Tanka! I knew this would take top spot the minute I read it! Hug, Sanda
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Date: 1/4/2015 2:22:00 PM
I just loved the "idea" of yours the best of all the ones I read, Carrie. So sweet. congrats on number one win. You surprised me this time. I had no clue this was yours.
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:34:00 AM
Amazing! I love the idea of magic sleeping in a tissue!! Good luck for the contest!!
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Date: 1/2/2015 7:15:00 PM
Hi Carrie, what a nice visual for most of us who will be doing this shortly if not already. Your words capture the feeling as the "magic" is safely wrapped in tissue for a long sleep. GL in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/1/2015 8:13:00 PM
Oh so true Carrie -and doesn't the house look so drab without them - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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