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Deceiving Dreams

Living in a dream is an exception The scenes are all real strange and different The music within it are all chained down Never do the notes express their lament As the nature of the dream is a swamp Portraying and delving an eerie truth Not knowing if you should get wet within Or find dry land and see just what your worth Dreams are deceiving, just where are you now Do you know exactly what they’re made of However strange they are, sometimes they’re great The best thing you could imagine with love I can see the dream floating above me I picture my soul lifting into it Dedication ensues now for this dream No longer is this view strange, it’s legit Power, this dream harbors a grand scene here Inside I see the immense existence Another massive passion within it Extreme lifelong passion deliverance But unlike the superior dreams bright There are those that fear envelopes inside The whistle blows letting you know time’s up You have entered the end of the bright side And darkness becomes all that you can see It radiates out from every corner I must find a way out, I must wake up That way I make sure it doesn’t bother The eventual dream mystifies me Always in the dark realm of the unknown I know sometimes I resist to dream then It comes to pass, I’m proud to dream what’s shown Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/28/2014 11:53:00 PM
This is very beautiful, I really enjoyed it. Russel - I don't know if you are sick. or what, but tonight I will say a prayer for you. May God keep you safe.... Lucilla
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Date: 3/17/2014 12:13:00 PM
wow, love this, Russell
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Date: 3/17/2014 3:59:00 AM
I extremely love this marvelous write of yours about dreams my very dear friend Russell. I'm a dreamer with so many dreams but no matter what kind of dreams they are they always give meaning to me. Kudos on another great write my dear friend. Thank you so much again for your precious gems & everything. More blessings to u! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/16/2014 8:22:00 AM
Russell, I am a deep dreamer as you know and I truly enjoyed this poem of dreaming, well done.
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Date: 3/15/2014 9:55:00 PM
how lovely Russell you have personalized a dream perfectly superb pen hugs
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Date: 3/15/2014 7:42:00 AM
Daydreams or night dreams they are things of which life is composed..I hope that you do dream...Thanks for the visit to my page..The old dog was not afraid to dream but was afraid in his dream..Sara
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Date: 3/15/2014 6:53:00 AM
Russell this piece was simply Wonderful, I really enjoyed reading.
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:27:00 AM
Deep write Russell, I enjoy all the different poems on dreams, yours is very unique... SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2014 12:54:00 AM
!!!
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Date: 3/15/2014 12:33:00 AM
Hello Russell, thank you for taking me on this side of the dream world. IN AND OUT* In my dreams I'm never on the outside looking in. A few times I felt a lift, and something big immersing, before the sudden dream sequence changed on me. Never will I know what they are made of. I do like how you point out the dark realm of the unknown... Enjoyed ~ Linda
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