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Deceived

Moldy floating rocks. Deceived by clear sparkling lake. Mirrored polution. for MORNING AMBIENCE contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 3:49:00 PM
Everything but the pollution.... Great verse....:JP]
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:01:00 PM
Thankxxx kind sir for "judging" for me.. appreciate the input.. see how easy it is? this title is terrific.. luv ya.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:29:00 PM
I have an idea.. why don't u be the judge? or sponsor one? will help u if u say yes.. I just luv this expression in Haiku about the new Morning Ambiance photo...luv.. this title... did u like my title? I got it from the Italian to English dictionary .. translation .. Atmosphere... luv ya.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/15/2010 5:14:00 PM
Interesting idea for the contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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