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Deceit As SILVER moon beguiles to SLIVER my heart, Its light reflects silently on my lifeless face, Chills of the night give me a frigid embrace, Simmering serene soul struggles seeking solace ! Written Dec 19th, 2015 For contest- 4 lines By Silent one Awarded 2nd place win

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Date: 12/21/2015 7:29:00 AM
Excellent! Congratulations on win! Love the last line.
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Date: 12/21/2015 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this most deserved win, Upma! A lovely entry. ** All the best. *** paul
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Date: 12/21/2015 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations Dr, Sharma.
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Date: 12/20/2015 9:40:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 12/20/2015 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Upma. Janice
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Date: 12/20/2015 7:24:00 PM
I really like this one from you , Upma. I think serene kind of goes against the word simmering. Other than that, I thought it was EXCELLENT. Congrats.
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:03:00 AM
Thnx Andrea for ur thoughful remarks... I meant simmering for an otherwise serene soul ..
Date: 12/20/2015 6:56:00 PM
I see this is a winner Upma, congrats.
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Date: 12/20/2015 5:52:00 PM
Beatifully expressed Upma! Congrats!
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Date: 12/20/2015 4:45:00 PM
dr. umpa, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:51:00 AM
Very nice congrats on your placement!
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:22:00 AM
DR.UMPA, Congratulations on your "4 line" win. WUV **SKAT Doodle** :)
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Date: 12/19/2015 1:50:00 PM
- Well done, great poem Dr. Upma - Luck in contest - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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